Prose: Something Devilish

Prose: Something Devilish

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Insanity at Masada

tinyurl.com/mw7txe34

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17 Apr 10

1. Godspite
2. Chasm
3. Georgia

Doug Stanhope

That's Why I Drink

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17 Apr 10

1. The 666 connection
2. Georgia Epilogue
3. Nightscape

Pale Blue Dot

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17 Apr 10

1. Something Devilish
2. The Godspite Deal
3. The Succubus

HoH
Thug

Playing with matches

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THORNINYOURSIDE

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Oh you big bunch of crazy talented freaks!

1. The 666 Connection
2. HOW MÖTLEY CRüE BROKE MY HEART
3. Chasm

Something Devilish would have been my fourth vote, it could have been my first but the ending spoils the piece.

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🙏🏻

Some other realm

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1. Chasm
2. Succubus
3. Georgia

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1. 666 Connection
2. Nightscape
3. How Motley Crue Broke my Heart

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KM

In the tall grass...

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Hey, is this still open?
If so:
1-Nightscape (I want to know moreee!!!! Well done 🙂 )
2- Georgia Epilogue (The start didn't interest me, but I've had to edit my post and bump "Something Devilish" off since re-reading it)
3- Motley crue (was this by Seitse perchance?)
Special mention to - Something Devilish (Fantastically written, Chess element certainly hitting target audience, the twist spoiled it for me though).

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1) Nightscape - easily my first choice; left me wanting more...
2) How Motley Crue Broke my Heart - good blend of humour and a certain bleakness (incidentally, how do you make an umlaut on the 'u'?)
3) Georgia epilogue - very well written

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Mystic Meg

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20 Apr 10

1. Georgia Epilogue
2. The Godspite Deal
3. Nightscape

Had to spend all day reading over and over to make a pick of just 3.

Sometimes I think we should pick 5, and from there take the 3 best at the end.

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The sky

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1. Nightscape (not sure I understand what's going on there, but it was enthralling; extra points for having exactly 666 words)
2. Chasm
3. The Godspite Deal

Honourable mention: Georgia Epilogue, for having exactly 666 words in 6 chapters (which unfortunately aren't 111 words each)

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Fast and Curious

slatington, pa, usa

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21 Apr 10

Originally posted by Nordlys
1. Nightscape (not sure I understand what's going on there, but it was enthralling; extra points for having exactly 666 words)
2. Chasm
3. The Godspite Deal

Honourable mention: Georgia Epilogue, for having exactly 666 words in 6 chapters (which unfortunately aren't 111 words each)
How much time left for voting? They all seem to me to be high quality writing. My wife is stuck mainly in bed and has to use a Kindle because she can make the print larger so I copied the whole lot into OO and upped the font so she can read it also. Can RHP wives vote?