Originally posted by divegeester
In this life I've seen everything I can see woman,
I've seen lovers flying through the air hand in hand
I've seen babies dancing in the midnight sun,
And I've seen dreams that came from the heavenly skies above
I've seen old men crying at their own grave sides
And I've seen pigs all sitting watching, picture slides
But I never seen nothing like you.

Chorus = "do you, do You want my love?"
ELO

Originally posted by Great Big Stees
Usually you start off with mild petting and then it just takes it's course to the climax.

I wasn't talking to you.

Originally posted by redbadger
multiplication

Or you.

Originally posted by Suzianne
Or you.

ok I take it back. takeaway.

Originally posted by Suzianne
How do you do it?

This thread had such a good start, maybe a second wind could help?

The point in writing poetry is to take metaphors and put them into a rhythmic scheme, they sound more powerful that way. If the metaphors are not well-used they also create sometimes strange effects:

You are my castle when I need comfort
you are the spring that makes me hop
you are the tear that is in my eye
just you being there makes my day

[probably this is just crapß]

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You must be a traditionalist then.

Originally posted by Great Big Stees
You must be a traditionalist then.

Or a missionary?

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Smooooookin' 😲😀

Originally posted by Great Big Stees
Smooooookin' 😲😀

Youre one bad ass DUDE GBS🙂