20 Mar 18
Originally posted by @drewnogalWell done, you wrote nice pieces.
Very well done to the first three and to everyone who entered, including myself 😉
for First Impressions and Love of a Friend, for which I set myself the most difficult task
of trying to write about men.
I guessed right about you Ghost, with your Cats entry which was so jolly and carefree. I thought
there were some brilliant ideas behind some of the entries and some were written so professionally,
such as Lady Rancible.
20 Mar 18
Originally posted by @ghost-of-a-dukeActually, I'm more Holden Caulfield fifty years on, but no matter. You're so jolly and carefree (or so one hears) ... 😉
Thank you.
I enjoyed reading both your entries. 🙂
20 Mar 18
Originally posted by @ghost-of-a-dukeYou did a real good Job. In fact I voted for both of your pieces.
I wrote Cat's Eyes and An Empty Paper Cup, so am a little embarrassed (but appreciative) to take first and second place.
I was honestly impressed with the standard of entries across the board and there would have been no complaints by me had I been outvoted. (Rusty won't believe that).
For anyone interested, my two entries were actually conne ...[text shortened]... ery ticket).
Thanks to everyone who voted, submitted, and to Ponderable for running things.
I think you managed really well to fit to the Topic emotions.
I voted for An empty Cup as highest, since you managed to convey the Problem of mixed emotions even when thinking about them.
The Cat Piece was a wonderful study in cat psychology.
Memories was also in my top three. It wonderfully describes the effect of ou history and our perception of history is imprinting our emotions. Well done there!
I will write short comments on the other entries over the time.
20 Mar 18
Originally posted by @drewnogalHey, I rather like being described as jolly and carefree. 🙂
Very well done to the first three and to everyone who entered, including myself 😉
for First Impressions and Love of a Friend, for which I set myself the most difficult task
of trying to write about men.
I guessed right about you Ghost, with your Cats entry which was so jolly and carefree. I thought
there were some brilliant ideas behind some of the entries and some were written so professionally,
such as Lady Rancible.
It was a lot of fun to write the cat story and the rhyming aspect actually made it easier. The line I was most pleased with was:
“Happiness,” the cat meowed, “is eating fish and sleeping,
life without is just a smoke alarm that throughout the night keeps beeping.”
20 Mar 18
Originally posted by @ponderableThanks. An empty paper cup actually took ten times the effort to write, so happy you voted it top.
You did a real good Job. In fact I voted for both of your pieces.
I think you managed really well to fit to the Topic emotions.
I voted for An empty Cup as highest, since you managed to convey the Problem of mixed emotions even when thinking about them.
The Cat Piece was a wonderful study in cat psychology.
Memories was also in my top three. It ...[text shortened]... ur emotions. Well done there!
I will write short comments on the other entries over the time.
My top vote went to Emojis, which was a really original idea. Would love to know who wrote it.
Originally posted by @ghost-of-a-dukegoad,
I wrote Cat's Eyes and An Empty Paper Cup, so am a little embarrassed (but appreciative) to take first and second place.
I was honestly impressed with the standard of entries across the board and there would have been no complaints by me had I been outvoted. (Rusty won't believe that).
For anyone interested, my two entries were actually conne ...[text shortened]... ery ticket).
Thanks to everyone who voted, submitted, and to Ponderable for running things.
Now you speak for what Rusty would think?...You really do think you are cock of the walk!!
Actually I "WAS" going to congratulate you.
-VR
20 Mar 18
Originally posted by @very-rustyThank you. I'll take your congratulations and invest it wisely in cardigans.
goad,
Now you speak for what Rusty would think?...You really do think you are cock of the walk!!
Actually I "WAS" going to congratulate you.
-VR
20 Mar 18
Originally posted by @ghost-of-a-duke‘sardines in his hat’
Hey, I rather like being described as jolly and carefree. 🙂
It was a lot of fun to write the cat story and the rhyming aspect actually made it easier. The line I was most pleased with was:
“Happiness,” the cat meowed, “is eating fish and sleeping,
life without is just a smoke alarm that throughout the night keeps beeping.”
was mine, I envisaged the sardine decorating his hat like a feather. 🙂
20 Mar 18
Originally posted by @ghost-of-a-dukeCat's Eyes had a Bob Dylan kind of feel (Like a rolling Stone)
I wrote Cat's Eyes and An Empty Paper Cup, so am a little embarrassed (but appreciative) to take first and second place.
I was honestly impressed with the standard of entries across the board and there would have been no complaints by me had I been outvoted. (Rusty won't believe that).
For anyone interested, my two entries were actually conne ...[text shortened]... ery ticket).
Thanks to everyone who voted, submitted, and to Ponderable for running things.
I thought it was the best
20 Mar 18
Originally posted by @lemondropWhoa, Bob Dylan. Now that really is a compliment. (Thoroughly undeserved, but I'll take it).
Cat's Eyes had a Bob Dylan kind of feel (Like a rolling Stone)
I thought it was the best
20 Mar 18
Originally posted by @ghost-of-a-dukegoad,
Thank you. I'll take your congratulations and invest it wisely in cardigans.
You are quite Welcome, but I think you are wearing out the cardigans bit.
-VR
21 Mar 18
Originally posted by @moonbusStart writing it straight away sir.
Thanks to all who contributed.
Thanks to all who voted.
Thanks to Pondy for organizing.
I know now what I have to write to get into the top three next time:
it's going to be "pink fluffy unicorns dancing on rainbows," in rhyme.
21 Mar 18
On the Story: "Holes"
Interesting take on the after-life with an interesting idea of a forced downward movement with a messianic figure not easy recognisable in the first read. So the Feeling of insecurity is adressed. Well written and with a nice Twist.
I didn't include it in my top three however since the "emotions" part was a bit short. The Story surely evokes emotions, but the characters don't Display many of them clearly...or so is my take as a non-native Speaker.