the first line of yer novel

@sonhouse said
@Very-Rusty
Ah, I'll keep that in mind🙂

He is great at dishing it out, but not so keen on the receiving part of it. 😉

-VR

@sonhouse said
@rookie54
Jeez, I was just joking. I knew what this thread was about, I put in a few lines myself.
Just rattling your chain🙂
Maybe we can have a new Novel prize, eh.

fair enough
contribute to the thread and we good

@rookie54 said
fair enough
contribute to the thread and we good

If you look back rookie you will find that he has contributed.

Perhaps that could be a first line for my novel? 🙂

-VR

The detective arrived on scene and the first question he asked the coroner, as he looked at what was left of the body, was, "Are you sure it was actually spontaneous combustion?"

@great-big-stees said
The detective arrived on scene and the first question he asked the coroner, as he looked at what was left of the body, was, "Are you sure it was actually spontaneous combustion?"

That is what I am talking about makes the reader want to know more.

-VR

I've never had a shower in my slippers.

"Is heaven real mummy?"

@cheesemaster said
The mineshaft is a ride at our local amusement park.
It is padded and fun and safe.

My novel is about RHP members getting drunk and having fun.
Did you alert me?

You need to get out more.

If he saw a chicken without feathers he'd probably alert it.

@very-rusty said
Suit yourself, if you want to mess up the OP's thread that is entirely on you. 😉

Maybe try thinking up some first line for a novel sentences, without attacking anyone? 😉

-VR

Love it when you stress the rules of a thread you have at no stage followed yourself.

I knew it was only a matter of time before they caught me and now, how to escape?

@ghost-of-a-duke said
Love it when you stress the rules of a thread you have at no stage followed yourself.

Here is the way it works goad as times change and rules change with them I do my best to go along with them. Once enforced I'll alert them, you peeved off about posts of yours I alerted and were removed, at least you said it was me, so I'll be more than happy to take credit for it. Do you enjoy messing up rookies thread?

-VR

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Such a childish rebuttal on your part rookie, I know you can do better!

How is that for a first sentence better than yours I think! 😛 🙂

-VR

Tracy hadn't set out to join an evil organization and was just something she had stumbled into while looking for work in the retail sector.

@jb70 said
I've never had a shower in my slippers.

LOL....Thanks for sharing! 😉

-VR